For my vows, I made sure to check with my pseudowife before writing anything. Jen and I briefly discussed what would be fresh, funny, and slightly out of the norm for a couple getting married, and we settled on the conclusion that the entire thing would be more interesting if the wife were to be very chill and blase about the whole thing, but the husband is all gung-ho, "Yay, marriage!"
At first, I was going to have Tim (my character) get super emotional and cry on the altar, professing his love with profound poetry, sobbing like a baby while Michelle (Jen's character) stands there horrified that Tim is losing it in front of their friends and family. It was decided, however, in group discussions that the groomsmen will be arriving late to the chapel after one final night of partying. Despite some objections from his longtime friends,and combined with a bit of liquid courage from the night before, I figured it would be more in-character to have Tim still kind of drunk, up there just pouring his heart out to his wife. Instead of getting gooey and emotional like originally planned, and instead of keeping it simple like Tim and Michelle originally planned, I wrote the second vows, the ones he comes up with off the cuff, without a brain/mouth filter. Tim's going up there speaking his mind and everything on it.
At first, I was going to have Tim (my character) get super emotional and cry on the altar, professing his love with profound poetry, sobbing like a baby while Michelle (Jen's character) stands there horrified that Tim is losing it in front of their friends and family. It was decided, however, in group discussions that the groomsmen will be arriving late to the chapel after one final night of partying. Despite some objections from his longtime friends,and combined with a bit of liquid courage from the night before, I figured it would be more in-character to have Tim still kind of drunk, up there just pouring his heart out to his wife. Instead of getting gooey and emotional like originally planned, and instead of keeping it simple like Tim and Michelle originally planned, I wrote the second vows, the ones he comes up with off the cuff, without a brain/mouth filter. Tim's going up there speaking his mind and everything on it.